- My Feedback -

 Assalamualaikum..this is the last post for my blog, voyage bel 120. first of all, i would like to thank to miss zuraidah sumery who are teaching me bel 120 in this semester. many thing that i have learn from her. many advive that she gave to me. what can i say, i really love you miss and i will never forget you. thanks for everything. and i will be a good students. please forgive, all the bad thing that i have done before. THANK YOU MISS!

- Our Last Class In This Sem -

   01 MARCH 2012......

   Assalamualaikum w.b.t...This is our class in this semester with miss zu..Today, we still discuss about last exam papers on APRIL 2010. Many advice and tips that miss gave to us. Other than that, I were really shocked. This is because suddenly, miss out something from her bag. There are some sweet that she buy for us from the money that she collect from us who are came late to the class. Many thing she brought such as crackers, sarsi water, soyabean and other thing. I did not expect that miss zu will gave us that food. I do not think that she will celebrated the losing day with us. But, that's the thing that are happen..I will never forget that day.

- Discuss About The Last Semester Paper -

   29 FEBRUARY 2012.......

   Assalamualaikum w.b.t....Today, we talk about past exams papers. There are on SEPTEMBER 2011. We discuss about all part in that paper. This is very good. This is because we can know what type of question that are were being given in the final exam of paper BEL 120. As you know, for example of the essay. We should focus a little more. This is because this part can help us to get more mark. This is the explanation of  body paragraph from the essay.
   
   BODY PARAGRAPH
          Topic Sentence

• topic
• controlling idea

          Supporting Details (for example, for instance)

• elaboration
• examples

         Concluding Sentence (hence, thus, therefore, so, as a result) 

       

          Unity

• only talk about the controlling idea which are related to the topic

            

- Think With The Group -

   27 FEBRUARY 2012......

   Assalamualaikum w.b.t...Miss Zu gave us some task that we need to do. There are, we shall diccuss in the group on the hook for what we want to do. Every group, it consist of four member. I'm group number six. My group consists of Nurul Ainna Suha, me, Hairul Fitri and also Faiz Izzat. First people, need to do the introduction. Second person, will do the first point. Third person, will do the second point. For the last point, it will be do by the last person. But for the conclusion, all the member in the group will discuss it together. This is because they can see what less verse in their essay. This is our topic for the essay:


   Write on essay of about 250 words on " Ways to Improve express bus services in Malaysia ". You may mention the following recommendations.


   

- Our Own Essay -

   23 FEBRUARY 2012........

   Assalamualaikum w.b.t....Today, Miss Zu want us to do our own essay based on the seven hook that she already teach us. She said, that we can choose any introduction based on the seven hook. There are:

1. Personal Example
2. Rhetorical Question
3. Contrast To The Thesis Statement
4. Facts Or Statistics
5. Quotation
6. Current Events
7. Definition

   I choose the Personal Example for my essay. This is because for me, this type of hook is simple and I know I can coral the essay by my own word. These is examples of essays that I have done.

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PERSONAL EXAMPLE : LESBIAN

     First time i saw her at the class 3 Cendekiawan. She was alone by herself. She wore a tight T-shirt and jeans like a man and the other girl wore a blouse. The 19 years-old girl, Ain is my best friend. Before this, she was a good girl. Suddenly, Ain became a “Pengkid” because she was tired of being deceived by a man and she was raped by her cousin who was older than her. From that point, she did not get any attention from her family. Moreover, she had been influenced by her friends who had been through the same experience. She decided to change her appearance from female to male. Ain life was full of bad experiences and now, she lives in a dark situation where she is happy outside but not in onside. There are several reasons that cause woman to change into “Pengkid”, such as family problems, environment, and the past experiences.

     One of the causes of why woman become a “Pengkid” is family problems. As all know, family is a group of individuals that are close to us. If something bad happens, it certainly will affect our lives. For example, if our father had married another woman, the attention he gave to us will be reduced and this will result in a fragile family relationships. Therefore, this family relationships should be treated with care.

     Besides that, another reason of why woman become a “Pengkid” is from environment. Environment is essential to ensure our daily lives. If this is not taken seriously, then it will destroy our lives in the future. For example, if we hang out with good people, then we will be good as them. However, if we hang out with people who were not so, the opposite was the one who will be able to. As a result, we must be clever in adapting to the environment.

     Last but not least, the past experience is also the another excuse of why woman become a “Pengkid”. Many people say that experience is a valueable and also the experience of our mature. Good experience will make us more confident, while the bad experience will cause us more trauma. For example, if we had been raped, then this will cause us to feel depressed and preoccupied overshadowed last story. So, we must persevere in the face of these vagaries of life.

     As a conclusion, family problems, environment, and the past experience are the major reasons that can occur based on why woman become a “Pengkid” in the society. We should think further about this issues before it become more serious and give an impact to the next generations.