Assalamualaikum w.b.t....Today, Miss Zu want us to do our own essay based on the seven hook that she already teach us. She said, that we can choose any introduction based on the seven hook. There are:
- Personal Example
- Rhetorical Question
- Contrast To The Thesis Statement
- Facts Or Statistics
- Quotation
- Current Events
- Definition
I choose the Personal Example for my essay. This is because for me, this type of hook is simple and I know I can coral the essay by my own word. These is examples of essays that I have done.
MAIZATULIANA BINTI ZAINAL ABIDIN
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PERSONAL EXAMPLE : LESBIAN
First time i saw her at the class 3 Cendekiawan. She was alone by herself. She wore a tight T-shirt and jeans like a man and the other girl wore a blouse. The 19 years-old girl, Ain is my best friend. Before this, she was a good girl. Suddenly, Ain became a “Pengkid” because she was tired of being deceived by a man and she was raped by her cousin who was older than her. From that point, she did not get any attention from her family. Moreover, she had been influenced by her friends who had been through the same experience. She decided to change her appearance from female to male. Ain life was full of bad experiences and now, she lives in a dark situation where she is happy outside but not in onside. There are several reasons that cause woman to change into “Pengkid”, such as family problems, environment, and the past experiences.
One of the causes of why woman become a “Pengkid” is family problems. As all know, family is a group of individuals that are close to us. If something bad happens, it certainly will affect our lives. For example, if our father had married another woman, the attention he gave to us will be reduced and this will result in a fragile family relationships. Therefore, this family relationships should be treated with care.
Besides that, another reason of why woman become a “Pengkid” is from environment. Environment is essential to ensure our daily lives. If this is not taken seriously, then it will destroy our lives in the future. For example, if we hang out with good people, then we will be good as them. However, if we hang out with people who were not so, the opposite was the one who will be able to. As a result, we must be clever in adapting to the environment.
Last but not least, the past experience is also the another excuse of why woman become a “Pengkid”. Many people say that experience is a valueable and also the experience of our mature. Good experience will make us more confident, while the bad experience will cause us more trauma. For example, if we had been raped, then this will cause us to feel depressed and preoccupied overshadowed last story. So, we must persevere in the face of these vagaries of life.
As a conclusion, family problems, environment, and the past experience are the major reasons that can occur based on why woman become a “Pengkid” in the society. We should think further about this issues before it become more serious and give an impact to the next generations.
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